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Band 7+: Why do some people refuse to eat animals ?

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I think for several reasons. One of the most crucial reasons is religious norms, and some religions follow strict rules about eating habits. For example, Hindus never eat cows because it is part of our spiritual traditions. On the other hand, some people have shifted towards vegan and vegetarian diets because researchers have proven that animal food has some negative effects on human health. So, they changed their dietary patterns. There are many reasons behind these issues that lead people to refuse eating meat.

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I think for several reasons one of the most crucial reason is religious norms and some of religions follow the strict rules about eating habits. For example Hindus we never eat cows which because it is our spiritual traditions but some on other hand some people now have grown shift towards to vegan and vegetarian dietations because some researchers prove that animal food have some bad effort effect to human extincence so they changed their diet pattern so there are so many reasons around these issues that people refusing eating meats

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The answer is well-organized and covers multiple reasons why some people refuse to eat animals. Consider expanding on the health reasons and providing specific examples of negative effects. Additionally, exploring ethical and environmental concerns would further strengthen the response.

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The answer is mostly coherent, but there are a few places where the fluency could be improved. For example, the phrase "towards to vegan and vegetarian dietations" is slightly awkward. The ideas are presented in a logical order, but smoother transitions between points would enhance the overall flow. Minor repetition and self-correction are present but do not significantly detract from the response.

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The vocabulary used is adequate and mostly accurate, although some words are not used with complete precision. For example, "bad effort effect" is not quite idiomatic. A wider range of vocabulary would strengthen the response. The use of 'extincence' instead of 'existence' shows a minor lexical error. More precise vocabulary choices would improve the score.

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While the answer demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, there are several inaccuracies. For instance, the sentence "some researchers prove that animal food have some bad effort effect to human extincence" contains grammatical errors (verb agreement, word choice). More attention to subject-verb agreement and correct preposition usage would improve accuracy. The overall grammatical range could be expanded by using more complex sentence structures.

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