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Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...............,

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Dear Mr Brown,

I am writing this latter to let you know, I will not be able to came next week as you told me,because, a i have a problem.

When I called the airline to booked visa for the next week, he told me, we do not have any airplane in this date. so I try to called another one , but, they told me, we have an airplane but with high visa cost. now I don’t have enough money to pay this visa tecket.

However, I still be able to start a jop in two weeks, so I can save more money for the visa,In addition to that, I can practice more to make sure every things will be ok for start this work.

I am sorry for this but let me know what’s you think about it.

Your’s fathfully

Alex Moon

Word Count: 144

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the explanation of the situation and problems could be clearer and more detailed. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a logical flow in places, and the numerous grammatical errors hinder the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but limited, and there is room for improvement in the range and precision of word choices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and overall understanding. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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