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Band 6+: Describe a family member you like to work with in future

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I would be incredibly happy if my brother became a business partner in the future. We could open a restaurant, an online store, a manufacturing business, or a pizza cafe. We could also launch any business idea we are passionate about. If we work together, the possibilities are endless. The main reason I want to work with him is that he is an entrepreneur. I believe in his ability to build a successful company. In fact, our relatives say that if he works in business, he will become an urban entrepreneur.

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I would be incredibly happy if my brother become a business partner in the future together. We could open a restaurant online store and manufacturing business or pizza cafe. We could also open a restaurant and launch any business idea. We are passionate about if we work together, possibilities are endless. The main reason I want to work with him is because he is an entrepreneur. I believe his ability to build a successful company. In fact, our relatives say that if he work business, he become an urban entrepreneur. Urban profit.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

business: 4

could: 2

entrepreneur: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

5.5

The response adequately addresses the topic by identifying a family member and suggesting potential business ventures. However, it lacks specific details about the brother's entrepreneurial skills or past experiences to support the claim of his abilities. Including concrete examples of his entrepreneurial qualities and how your skills complement his would strengthen the response and enhance the level of detail. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There are a few minor instances of repetition and slightly hesitant phrasing ("We could open a restaurant online store and manufacturing business or pizza cafe. We could also open a restaurant and launch any business idea."). Improving the flow by combining similar ideas would enhance fluency. For example, instead of listing multiple business ideas separately, you could say something like, "We could explore various ventures, from a restaurant or pizza cafe to an online store or manufacturing business."

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "entrepreneur" and "possibilities are endless" are well-chosen. However, the phrase "urban profit" is unclear and should be replaced with a more precise term. Expanding on the types of businesses you'd consider would demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors, primarily in verb tense consistency ("if my brother become", "if he work business, he become"). These errors detract from the overall grammatical accuracy. Focusing on consistent verb tenses and subject-verb agreement will significantly improve this aspect. The sentence structure is simple in places; using more complex sentence structures would demonstrate a wider grammatical range.

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