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Band 6+: Do you think children should learn to play musical instruments?

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I believe that children should learn to play musical instruments for two reasons. Firstly, it helps them clear their path, and if they are interested in certain instruments, they can pursue it as a future career. Secondly, some children have musical talent, and it helps them discover themselves and also express their personality.

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I believe that children should learn to play musical instruments for two reasons. Firstly, it helps them to clear their path and if they are interested in some musical instruments, they can continue it as a future career. Secondly, some children have musical talent and it helps them to discover themselves and also some intro some some person has

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