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Band 5+: How can societies effectively address the challenges posed by an aging population?

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So this problem can be addressed because nowadays children are being born as parents are becoming aware of how important a child is. I think this issue will be resolved in the next 10 to 15 years, as medicine is also available for the elderly. So, that's the solution to the problem.

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So this problem can be solved due to the fact that nowadays children are being born because parents are being aware of how important the kid is. So I think this problem will be solved in the next maybe 10 to 15 years as nowadays also medicine was out for the usage of the elderly people. So yeah, that’s the solution to the problem.

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