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Band 6+: how can we get young people to do exercise?

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We can encourage young people to exercise by providing diverse facilities, like running tracks and gyms. Offering healthy snacks like fruit and water after workouts can be motivating. Additionally, discounts on membership fees and educational programs about the benefits of exercise can make it more appealing. This comprehensive approach can help young people develop healthy exercise habits.

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We can encourage youth to do more exercise by providing different kind of facilities like after running. If we gave them treat like Gllco and water, this could encourage them to participate. Moreover, also give them offers like discount on monthly fee and providing knowledge about the beneficial part of exercise. This can help to do more exercise for young.

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Task Response

The student provides a good range of ideas for encouraging young people to exercise, but some are not very practical or well-explained. For example, "after running" is not a facility, and "Gllco" is not a clear term. The student could benefit from using more specific examples and explaining their ideas in more detail.

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The student's speech is generally fluent, but there are some instances of repetition and self-correction. The ideas are presented in a logical order, but the connections between them could be clearer. Using more cohesive devices like "for example" and "in addition" would improve the flow of the answer.

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The student uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some errors in word choice and collocations. For example, "treat" is not the best word to use in this context, and "monthly fee" is not a common phrase. The student could benefit from expanding their vocabulary related to exercise and health.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student demonstrates a good understanding of grammar, but there are some errors in sentence structure and verb tenses. For example, "This can help to do more exercise for young" is grammatically incorrect. The student could benefit from practicing using a wider range of grammatical structures and paying more attention to accuracy.

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