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Band 7+: how can we get young people to do exercise?

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I feel like exercise is supposed to be fun, and nowadays in school, a lot of kids are just forced into a sport. They don't really choose for themselves. At least that was my experience, and I think showing more types of sports to kids would help this problem a lot.

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I feel like exercise is supposed to be fun and nowadays in school a lot of kids just get forced into a sport. They don’t really choose for themselves. At least that was my experience and I think showing more types of sports to kids would help this problem a lot.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Pronunciation

8.5

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Task Response

This response is relevant to the question and provides a personal perspective. To improve, consider expanding on the suggestion of showing more types of sports and exploring other strategies to encourage youth participation in exercise.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. Minor improvements in fluency could be achieved by pausing slightly more between sentences and using smoother transitions. The response is concise and directly addresses the question.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and accurate. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used to express the ideas more precisely. For example, instead of 'forced into a sport,' the student could use 'obligated to participate in a sport' or 'compelled to play a sport'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate with only minor inconsistencies. The sentence structure is simple but effective. The student could improve by using more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical accuracy.

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how can we get young people to do exercise?

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how can we get young people to do exercise?

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how can we get young people to do exercise?

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