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Band 6+: how can we get young people to do exercise?

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I think we can get young people to do more exercise by showing them the positive aspects of exercising. Also, since young people prefer appearance, they may be attracted by the appealing side of exercising.

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I think we can get young people to do more exercise by showing them the positive side of exercising. Also, as young people prefer appearance more, they may be attracted by good looking side of exercising.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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people: 2

exercising: 2

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6.5

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some ideas. However, it could benefit from more detailed explanations and examples to support the suggestions. Consider expanding on the 'positive aspects' and 'appealing side' of exercise with specific examples to illustrate your points.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-organized. The ideas flow logically. Minor improvements in fluency could be achieved by slightly smoother transitions between sentences. For example, instead of 'Also, as young people prefer appearance more...', a more natural phrasing might be 'Furthermore, young people's focus on appearance...'

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'positive side' and 'good looking side' are acceptable but could be replaced with more precise and sophisticated vocabulary, such as 'positive aspects' and 'appealing aspects' as in the refined answer. A wider range of vocabulary would enhance the response.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor issues. The sentence 'as young people prefer appearance more' is grammatically acceptable but could be improved for style and precision. Using more complex grammatical structures would improve the score. For example, using a subordinate clause instead of a simple sentence would add sophistication.

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