Band 5+: What factors should be taken into account when making advertisement?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is relevant to the question and touches upon key aspects of advertisement. However, it could benefit from expanding on the factors mentioned and providing more specific examples. Consider exploring other factors such as budget, message clarity, and the overall marketing strategy.

The answer is not very fluent. There are many hesitations and repetitions, such as "and also" and the unclear phrasing of the target audience. The ideas are not very well organized. Work on smoother transitions between ideas and reduce filler words. Practice speaking more naturally and confidently.

The vocabulary is adequate but not very precise. Words like "attacking audience" are not quite right; the speaker should use more precise terms like "target audience." The phrase "effective weeds" is unclear and needs to be replaced with something like "effective strategies" or "successful campaign." Expand your vocabulary related to advertising and marketing.

There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect sentence structure and word order. For example, "It needs to consider the attacking audience that and which is grouped of the advertisement is in support" is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Focus on improving sentence structure and accuracy. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures.