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Band 7+: What skills do you think children should learn before going to school?

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I believe children should learn how to make friends before they go to school. They also need to learn about manners. For example, if they need to go to the bathroom during class, they should use the bathroom and wash their hands. They should also tell the teachers and ask for permission. Additionally, they need to learn how to respect all the teachers. They also need to learn about discipline. For example, they need to stay quiet during class and only play during the breaks of courses and after school.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I believe children should learn about how to make friends before they go into school. And also they need to learn about manners. Like, uh, um, if they need to go to bathroom, to use the bathroom duringin class. And they need to waste their hands. And also tell the teachers and ask for permission. And also they need to, uh, learn how to respect all the teachers. And they also need to learn about the disciplines. For example, they need to stay quiet during the class. Andak, uh, only play when, uh, during the breaks of courses. And also after school.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Vocabulary Repetition:

they: 8

need: 5

learn: 4

should: 3

also: 3

during: 3

school: 2

about: 2

example: 2

bathroom: 2

class: 2

teachers: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is well-organized and covers several relevant skills. Consider expanding on the types of social skills needed for making friends, and providing more diverse examples of discipline and respect beyond classroom settings. Adding a brief explanation of why these skills are important would further strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There are a few minor hesitations and filler words ("uh", "um"), but these do not significantly impede understanding. Improving fluency would involve reducing these fillers and practicing smoother transitions between ideas. The structure is logical and easy to follow.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate and mostly accurate. The student uses a range of vocabulary related to school and social skills. While the vocabulary is functional, using more sophisticated synonyms and avoiding repetition would enhance the response. For example, instead of repeatedly using "they need to learn," the student could use varied phrasing such as "it's important for them to develop," or "they should cultivate." Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. For example, "duringin class" should be "during class." There is some repetition in sentence structure. The student demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, but improving accuracy and variety would elevate the score. Focusing on correct use of articles and prepositions would be beneficial.

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