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Band 7+: Who should get more promotion opportunities in the workplace, young people or older people?

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Definitely, I firmly believe that older people should receive more promotion opportunities in the workplace than younger people. The main reason is that they have valuable work experience. On the other hand, young people may also receive promotions because they have abilities such as computer skills, language skills, and other technical abilities, but experience plays a peculiar role compared to some abilities.

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Definitely, I firmly believe that older people should receive more promotion opportunities in the workplace than younger people. The main reason is that they have valuable work experience. On the other hand, young people may also receive promotion because they have abilities such as computer skills, skills, language, skills and other technical abilities, but experience have a peculiar role rather than some abilities.

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abilities: 3

receive: 2

experience: 2

other: 2

skills: 2

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The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors, such as 'experience have a peculiar role'. The correct form is 'experience has a peculiar role' or 'experience plays a peculiar role'. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and practice using a wider range of grammatical structures to demonstrate greater proficiency.

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