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Band 6+: (2024) The graph shows Internet Usage in Taiwan by Age Group, 1998-2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar graph, showcasing internet usage in Taiwan by various age groups across the years 1998, 1999, and 2000. In 1998: Less than 15 (2%), 16 - 30 years (53%), 31 to 50 years (41%), 50 or more (4%). In 1999: Less than 15 (4%), 16 - 30 years (45%), 31 to 50 years (39%), 50 or more (8%). In 2000: Less than 15 (9%), 16 - 30 years (44%), 31 to 50 years (37%), 50 or more (10%).

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The bar graph illustrates the internet usage in Taiwan by age group between 1998 to 2000, measured in percentages.

Overall, the 16-30 age group had the highest internet usage, while the under-15 group had the lowest. The figure for the youngest and oldest age groups increased, whereas those for the two middle groups decreased.

Looking for the details, the percentage of 16-30 aged stood at 53% in 1998, before falling at 45% in 1999 and 44% in 2000. Similarly, the figure for 31-50 years-olds decreasing from 41% to 39% and than 37% over the given period.

Turning to the remaining age groups, the internet usage people under 15 increased from 2% in 1998 to 8% in 1999, before reaching 9% in 2000. Meanwhile, the figure for people 50 or more also rose from 4% to 8%, and finally 10%. Compared with youngest and oldest, the figure of the middle age groups was considerably higher for the most of the period.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

figure: 4

groups: 4

internet: 3

usage: 3

group: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main features of the graph, highlighting the highest usage among the 16-30 age group and the increasing trends for the youngest and oldest groups. It makes relevant comparisons and presents the data in a clear structure. However, there are minor inaccuracies and omissions: the under-15 group increased from 2% to 4% in 1999, not 8%, and the 50+ group increased from 4% to 8% in 1999, not 8% (which is correct). Also, the phrase 'Looking for the details' is awkward, and there are minor grammatical errors. To improve, ensure precise data reporting and refine language for clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall statement and logical grouping of age groups. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the phrase 'Looking for the details' which is awkward, and the final sentence 'Compared with youngest and oldest' is unclear. The paragraphing is adequate but could be improved by more effective use of linking words.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'illustrates', 'measured in percentages'). However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'the internet usage people under 15' and 'the figure of the middle age groups'. A wider range of precise vocabulary and more natural collocations would enhance the report. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, 'between 1998 to 2000' should be 'between 1998 and 2000', 'the percentage of 16-30 aged' should be 'the percentage of the 16-30 age group', and 'decreasing from 41% to 39% and than 37%' has a tense error and a misspelling. The report would benefit from more accurate grammar and a wider range of sentence structures.

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