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Band 6+: A college asked its graduates to give a speech to current students about their professional careers and future opportunities. You would like to participate. Write a letter and say What do you want to talk about? Why do you think students will be interested in it? Suggest a suitable date and time for your speech.

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my desire to become a speaker in upcoming career fair week at our university as an alumni.

I am planning to focus on teaching about importance of the networking as well as the best way to do it. Being a senior manager at financial enterprise, I would be the best person to talk about it. I will start with basic concepts through various exercises that will be followed by different practical scenarios to cover advanced topics on the subject.

During final year, networking can play a vital role to land a good job. Nowadays, most of the employer prefer candidates with a reference and networking can become helpful for achieving it. Consequently, if done right, it can open many door of opportunities.

I am very much interested in sharing my knowledge on how to utilize social skills. Hence, can you guide me through the process of how to schedule a seminar? I am available any day during career fair after 5:00 PM.

Thank you so much, and I look forward to your prompt response. Yours sincerely, Smit Parmar

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

networking: 3

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Task Response

7

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task. The topic is clearly stated, the reasons for student interest are explained, and a suitable date and time are suggested.

Coherence & Cohesion

6

The letter is generally well-organized, but there are some minor issues with sentence structure and flow that affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are a few instances where more precise or sophisticated language could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The letter contains some grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the writing.

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