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Band 5+: A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. She is planning to stay with you, but you can't accommodate her. Write a letter to her Tell her the reasons Apologise Make alternative arrangements

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Dear Karan,

I am writting this letter with a great sorrow that I could not accomodate you while your journey to our home land. From the last few days my uncle was very sick, which turns into a heart stoke. We contacted to a speacialised doctor from an another city. The suregry has been scheduled on the same time period you are visiting the country.

There is no other option for me rather than to stay with my relative during the operation. The situation like this happens, as we planned the things will not go that way. I am very sorry for that.

No need to worry, if I will not be available at the moment, my younger brother will take care of the staying. There is a bond between two of you and I hope you will enjoy my simbling company.

It will be very generous of you for forgiving me.

Yours lovingly

Abhishek

Word Count: 155

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter addresses all parts of the task. The reason for not being able to accommodate the friend is clearly explained, an apology is given, and alternative arrangements are offered. However, the explanation could be slightly more detailed and the alternative arrangement could be more concrete.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved. Some sentences lack smooth transitions, impacting the overall coherence. The grammar errors affect the readability and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate, but there's room for improvement in word choice and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary would enhance the letter's impact. Some words are misspelled.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and accuracy of the message. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for better communication.

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