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Band 4+: A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in * describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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Hello my dear Leyla,

How are you? Yesterday, I was very happy when had taken your letter from you. It is very exciting to hear that you will be moving to Germany and congratulations on your job!

Initially, I suggest you an interesting part of the city to live in Germany. As youʼll be working in the center of the city, you could think about living near me in Brighton. Itʼs large town in western Germany. Because in there people are friendly, kind and it has relaxed vibe.

Iʼll introduce you the public transport in this town. There are different vehicles. You could go to work by bus, by train and underground. I think a great deal of taxi is 12 sums on kilometrs. Every morning, many buses and trains are very crowded with people.

In addition to, Iʼll introduce you to my friends. Iʼm sure youʼll meet new people at your office too.

I look forward to coming and replying soon.

Best regards,

Thomas Shelby.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

germany: 3

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by suggesting an interesting part of the city to live in and briefly describing the public transport. However, more details could have been provided about meeting new people in the city.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion. The flow could be improved by organizing the ideas more logically and using transition words to connect them better. Additionally, the paragraphing could be more effectively managed.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. More sophisticated and accurate vocabulary could enhance the overall quality of the letter. Additionally, some sentences could be phrased more naturally.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While there is an effort to use a variety of sentence structures, there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout the letter. Paying closer attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, and article usage would improve the grammatical accuracy.

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