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Band 4+: A friend helped you when you moved to a new city. Write a letter to thank them. explain why you moved describe how they helped say how you feel now

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hlo velly

I writing this letter to say thank you for everything you did In last couple of davs. You made my job easier which was very difficult to do.

As u know I recently got my new IT job in Mumbai city, Mumbai is city of dreams so I get the opportunity to do something in my field so I decied to move here. It was very hard for me to commute everyday for work and also u living here so I decied to move here.

Velly u made my moving easy because you know everything about this place, you found rental apartment on very reasonable price for me. Also u did grocery for me.

I am feeling grateful I have friend like you. I am feeling well settled and planning to stay here with my family one day

Moving in new city is always difficult it will take lot of courage, but with the help of near and dear ones we can do everything

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

everything: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, explaining the reason for the move, describing the help received, and expressing feelings. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the message is clear. To improve, focus on using more natural and accurate language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect your thoughts and create a smoother narrative. For example, when transitioning between explaining why you moved and describing how your friend helped, a clearer link would enhance the coherence. Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively used to separate distinct ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inaccurate ('I writing' instead of 'I am writing'). Expanding your range of vocabulary and ensuring correct usage would improve this aspect. For instance, instead of 'made my job easier,' you could say 'significantly eased the process' or 'made the transition much smoother.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, including incorrect verb tenses, missing articles, and awkward phrasing. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. For example, 'I writing' should be 'I am writing,' and 'u know' should be 'you know.' Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of prepositions.

Band 4+: A friend helped you when you moved to a new city. Write a letter to thank them. explain why you moved describe how they helped say how you feel now

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