Letter

Band 4+: You are planning a weekend getaway with a group of friends and need to make arrangements for accommodation and activities. Write a letter to the accommodation provider (e.g., hotel, rental property owner) outlining your requirements and confirming your booking. You should include details about: - the number of people in your group and the dates of your stay - any specific room preferences or requirements - any activities you would like to arrange through them.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

Hi hotel administrator,

Hope you are doing well.

I’m writing to request some information regarding booking 2 rooms for 4 people.

Me and my friends inclined to stay at your hotel on this weekend, the days between 13-15th February. One of the rooms needs to include two separate beds and for the other one twin-sized bed is suitable.

I have an apple allergy and one of my friends has an intolerance for gluten. We also kindly request you to elobrate these restrictions.

Regarding these informations, could you please provide us with the available options?

Thank you for your time.

Regards,

Word Count: 100

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the requirements of the task, including dates, number of guests, room types, and dietary restrictions. However, it could benefit from more specific details regarding the purpose of the stay (a weekend getaway with colleagues) and any additional facility requirements, such as a meeting room, to fully satisfy the task requirements. Also, the letter could be improved by using more formal language and a clearer structure. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider starting with a clear statement of purpose and then providing details in a logical order. Using more formal language and transitional phrases would enhance the flow and clarity of the letter.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but it could be more precise and varied. For example, instead of 'inclined to stay,' you could use 'interested in booking.' Expanding your range of vocabulary would make the letter sound more professional.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect the clarity of the letter. For example, 'Me and my friends inclined to stay' should be 'My friends and I are interested in staying.' Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and appropriate prepositions. Proofreading carefully before submitting would help catch these errors.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

You are taking a course at a local college. The deadline for your project was last week but you haven t finished it. Write a letter to your lecturer. In your letter introduce yourself explain why you haven't handed in the project yet request more time to do it.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium