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Band 6+: A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject." Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give details of the course you took at the university • explain why you recommend the university • give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……,

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Dear Sam,

Hope you’re doing well! Yesterday, I’ve received your letter, and I’m glad to know that you’re going to apply for the Hospitality Management course at MK university, Indore.

This course is one of the best course which opens up several job opportunities. You’ll learn about travel and tourism as I know that you love to travel the world. I’ve secured a well-paid job in seven star hotel in Mumbai. I believe that you’ll also get your dream job soon.

Moreover, you made a right choice of choosing MK university as the teachers are friendly and experienced. In addition, the library is open for twenty-four hours, and provide traditional as well as digital sources to enhance the knowledge.

Although you can apply in-person, you might need to wait for long hours in queue. I’d like to suggest that instead you should apply online on their website. Just go to their official website and in admission section follow the steps, and within ten minutes you’ll complete the registration.

If you need any assistance during registration call me. Best of luck!

Kind regards,

Pooja

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

apply: 3

course: 3

you'll: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, providing details about the course, reasons for recommending the university, and advice on how to apply. The information is relevant and sufficient. To further improve, consider adding more specific details about the course curriculum or specific professors that made the experience exceptional. Also, you could elaborate on the university's facilities or student support services.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is logical, and the letter addresses all points mentioned in the task. To improve coherence, ensure a smoother flow between ideas by using a wider range of cohesive devices. For example, in the second paragraph, you could add a sentence that clearly links your job to the course you took. Also, avoid abrupt transitions between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate more varied and sophisticated vocabulary related to the course, university, and application process. For example, instead of 'the best course,' you could use 'a highly regarded program.' Also, avoid using informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, 'Yesterday, I've received your letter' should be 'Yesterday, I received your letter'. Also, 'one of the best course' should be 'one of the best courses'. Pay closer attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Proofreading carefully will help minimize these errors.

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