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Band 5+: "A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject." Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give details of the course you took at the university • explain why you recommend the university • give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……,

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Dear Mickey,

How are you? I hope this letter find you well. Although it is such a short time since we last saw each other, it feels much longer. Through this letter, I would like to advice some University in Australia for your consideration before you take the particular of course.

Firstly, I would like to give you information about Early Childhood Education and Care. This course will teach you about how to take care of baby. You will learn as Educator to educate the baby, keep them safe, and train their motoric sensor for growth their intelegence.

Secondly, this course is good chance for you if you love caring children. In Australia, this course was very popular and has huge opportunity to someone who want to find permanent residence in Kangoroo’s Island as well. The Australian Government intensively advertise this course because they have less educator in their country. So, it would be good benefit for us as foreign to have good career in Australia.

Last one, I would recommend you to take this course in Academies Australasia. They have good rating and testimonies from students who was studied here before. Cost of this course is affordable as well. If you interest with this course in Academies Australasia, you can visit their website and then enroll your application by online and just follow the instructions.

I hope with this letter you can have some information and helping you to thinking about what course I took and the University as well. If you have some questions you can free text me.

Take care and write back soon

Vivin

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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course: 8

would: 4

their: 4

letter: 3

about: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately covers the requirements of the task, providing details about the course, reasons for recommending the university, and advice on how to apply. There are a few minor lapses in providing specific details, but overall, the response is well-organized and relevant. To improve, consider adding more specific details about the course content and the university's facilities or resources.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally organized with a clear introduction, body paragraphs addressing the task points, and a conclusion. However, the flow between some ideas could be smoother. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect ideas within paragraphs and between them. For example, in the second paragraph, you could add a phrase like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition to this' to link the popularity of the course with the opportunity for permanent residency. Also, paragraphing could be improved by ensuring each paragraph focuses on a single main idea.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there are instances where more precise or sophisticated word choices could enhance the letter. For example, instead of 'teach you about how to take care of baby,' you could say 'provide training in infant care.' Also, avoid informal language like 'Kangoroo's Island'; use the proper name, 'Australia.' Expanding your range of vocabulary and using more formal language where appropriate will improve this aspect of your writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'I would like to advice some University' should be 'I would like to advise you about some universities.' Also, 'growth their intelegence' should be 'develop their intelligence.' Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage ('a,' 'an,' 'the'). Proofreading carefully and focusing on sentence structure will help improve grammatical accuracy.

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