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Band 7+: "A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject." Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give details of the course you took at the university • explain why you recommend the university • give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……,

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Dear Jerry,

I hope you’re doing fine. I’m glad to hear you wish to do the same course as I did . I am writing to you to share my thoughts about this.

Entrepreneurship is a great ubject. I did this course at the university of Buea, Comeroon. Before you apply for this, you need to know the following. Firstly, it takes place once a week, every friday. The class. commences at 1pm and terminates at 5pm. Again, at the start of every class, a quiz worth 10 points is given which will be considered for the overall assessment.

This weekly assessment prompted us to take the course with diligence, and so I highly recommend this institution to you. Considering this School is considering a mastery of the subject. I guarantee you will enjoy every bit of the fee you paid for this course. Not only will you obtain knowledge but will also gain practical skills. I currently work at a shop because of both these skills and knowledge I acquired, and I hope the same for you if you consider it.

For the application, I used my identity card. Other Identifications documents like passport can also be used. A sum of 50,000 frs is needed. My application was done online and it took me about 30 minutes to complete.

I look forward to hear about your experience if you end up doing this course.

Yours Lovely,

Sharon James.

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course: 4

about: 3

every: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately covers all requirements of the task, providing relevant and sufficient information about the course, the university, and the application process. The advice is practical and tailored to the friend's situation. There are a few minor areas for improvement, such as elaborating slightly more on the specific benefits of the university beyond the weekly assessments and ensuring consistently formal language throughout. Overall, it's a well-written and helpful response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and addresses all parts of the task. The structure is clear, with an introduction, body paragraphs covering the course details, recommendation, and application advice, and a conclusion. However, transitions between some ideas could be smoother to enhance the flow. For example, elaborating slightly more on why the weekly assessments made you recommend the institution could strengthen the connection between these points.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and generally accurate for the task. There's a good attempt to convey enthusiasm and provide specific details. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more varied and sophisticated vocabulary related to course benefits, university recommendations, and application processes. For instance, instead of 'enjoy every bit of the fee,' you could say 'derive substantial value from the investment.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, with mostly accurate sentence structures. There are a few areas where grammatical accuracy could be improved. For example, 'Considering this School is considering a mastery of the subject' is a bit awkward and could be rephrased for clarity. Pay close attention to sentence structure and word choice to ensure clarity and precision.

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