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Band 5+: A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear...,

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Dear friend Carine,

I hope you are doing well. I am writting to letter so that i can share with some tips for you to fit in you new school. Do not worry, your new school is a good one and i am quite sure that you will enjoy it.

Firstly, for you to be able to have friends, you need to be flexible and welcome other students with kindness and smile. This will show your colleague that they access you easily and become friend with you.

Secondly, the school has differents extra curricurum activities which can help you feel familiar with the school. I can suggest you participate in dancing club with your dancing skilss, you will be able to make friends easily.

However, make sure you do not join the group of popular students at school as most of the time they have bad reputation and would affect your process of fitting.

I wish you all the best in your new school my dearest friend.

Yours affectionately,

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

school: 6

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The suggestions are relevant and helpful, although they could be more detailed and specific.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better transitions and paragraph structure. Grammar errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is sufficient but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated word choices would enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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