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The image contains a table and a line graph titled 'A line graph to show the number of earthquakes in a year'. The table displays frequency by season: Spring 2, Summer 6, Autumn 7, and Winter 3. The line graph has a vertical y-axis labeled 'Frequency' ranging from 0 to 8 and a horizontal x-axis labeled 'Season' with categories Spring, Summer, Autumn, and Winter. The data points plotted on the graph are: Spring at a frequency of 2, Summer at 5, Autumn at 7, and Winter at 3.

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The polylone graph gives data on earthquakes which observed in US during a year.

Overall, it is clear that, autumn was the season in which happened most of the shakes. However,lowest of all other seasons were in spring.

To begin with, in spring and winter indicators were low in comparison with other 2 season, only 2 tymes were quakes. When it came to summer shakes became more freaquently; they experiienced a steady increase from 2 tymes to 5 tymes. Between summer and winter there witnessed minor fluctuation. Further analysing the graph autumn showed a downward trand which was the pick when comparing with other seasons, consisiting of 7 tymes.And then the numbers dropped noticably. Winter also had the second lowest frequancy with 3 tymes

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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tymes: 4

which: 3

other: 3

winter: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task, presenting the main trends and key data points from the line graph. The overall structure is logical, with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some areas for improvement. The language used contains inaccuracies and awkward phrasing, which affects clarity. For example, 'polylone graph,' 'shakes became more freaquently,' and 'downward trand' need correction. Also, the report could benefit from more precise language and a wider range of vocabulary to describe the data. To improve, focus on using accurate terminology, proofreading for grammatical errors, and expanding your vocabulary related to describing trends and data. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat clear, but the numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing disrupt the flow of information. Transitions between sentences and ideas need improvement to enhance coherence. Paragraphing is present but could be more effective in grouping related information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is repetition of words like 'quakes' and 'tymes'. Expanding the range of vocabulary and using more specific terms would improve the report. For example, instead of 'shakes,' consider using 'earthquakes' or 'seismic events.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('happened' instead of 'occurred'), subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of articles. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving basic grammar and sentence construction to enhance clarity and accuracy.

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