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Band 9: A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter Describe what this book was about Explain how this book influenced you Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam,

The book that influenced me most is Rich Dad Poor Dad, which was written by the well-known businessman Mr. Robert Kiyosaki. His book discusses a wide range of financial aspects, such as how exactly to utilize wealth, rules of investment, and survival techniques in case of bankruptcy.

There are several reasons compelling me to read the aforementioned book, such as the explanation of a rule for the division of monthly income, which is 30 percent savings, 20 percent expenditure, and 50 percent investment in different commodities such as gold, silver, and real estate in order to generate profit for utilization on luxuries. Additionally, the majority of people fail to invest in the stock market because of the risk of losing their investments; this book includes some chapters focused on the stock market and its functioning, such as how to find brokers and understand balance sheets.

This book would definitely influence a wide range of people, and the notion behind it is that we live in a financially unstable world; therefore, it is essential to become financially literate in order to stabilize wealth. This book has summarized important rules of investment and income generation ideas, which would definitely attract the attention of readers.

I hope you would consider this book in your article. I am looking forward to reviewing your magazine.

Yours faithfully,

Vikash

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Overall Band Score

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Task Response

9

The letter comprehensively addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear description of the book, explaining its influence, and discussing its potential impact on others. The content is well-organized and presented in a coherent manner. The language used is sophisticated and appropriate for the context. Overall, the letter demonstrates excellent writing skills and effectively fulfills the task requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

9

The letter presents a clear and well-organized response to the prompt. The ideas flow logically, and the paragraphing is effective. The use of cohesive devices is natural and enhances the overall readability.

Lexical Resource

9

The letter demonstrates a wide range of vocabulary used accurately and appropriately. The language is sophisticated and reflects a strong command of lexical features.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9

The letter exhibits a wide range of grammatical structures with full flexibility and control. Grammar and punctuation are used appropriately throughout the response, contributing to its clarity and effectiveness.

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