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Band 4+: Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a map with two proposed shopping mall sites, S1 and S2, for the city of Brandfield; S1 is located between a golf course, a housing estate to its northeast, an industrial area south, and close to the city center, whereas S2 is situated near another housing estate, beside the river, and adjacent to the railway running along its southern border.

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The map shows the city of Brandfield. Overall, city planners decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and both sides of the area had been proposed.

Looking at the map in detail, it can be seen that the city centre is located in the S1 site where also located Housing estate, and Golf Coune and park. However, the city centre is divided by the river. Between, golf Coune and City centre is located road, while between Housing estate and previously mentioned two locations is located railway.

On the second site of the map there is only Industrial estate which is located in the east side of the sity. Moreover there is trailway which is started in the noth side of the city and ending in the east side of the map where is located site S2. While the road is located between city centre and the industrial estate.

In conclusion in the S1 site there are already located enough locations which are already have been using by people. While in the site S2 there is only one location. However the sity has river, roads, and trailway in the middle of the city.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the locations of the two proposed shopping mall sites, but it lacks clarity and accuracy. The description is somewhat disorganized and contains inaccuracies regarding the locations of features. The writing also suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, making it difficult to follow. To improve, focus on providing a more structured and accurate description of each site, using clear and concise language. Pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to enhance readability.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and transitions between ideas. The information is presented in a somewhat disjointed manner, making it difficult to follow the main features and comparisons effectively. Paragraphing could be improved to group related information together. For example, discuss all aspects of site S1 in one paragraph and site S2 in another. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast,' 'similarly,' 'furthermore') to link ideas and sentences more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is repetition of words and phrases (e.g., 'located'). To improve, try to use synonyms and a wider range of vocabulary to describe the locations and their relationships. For example, instead of 'located,' consider using 'situated,' 'positioned,' or 'adjacent to.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect word order. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving basic grammar skills and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. For example, 'both sides of the area had been proposed' should be revised to 'two sites had been proposed.'

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