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Band 6+: Bus service in your local area is limited. Write a letter to the bus company

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Dear Sir

The reason why I am writing this letter is that I would like to report this inconvenience due to the lack of local bus services. I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing formally this letter to request you to improve our bus system.

Our local area is located in a very remote place. We need to attract a new bus service for our children to increase the speed and knowledge of going to school. These days we are faced with some problems i.e. when going to work and returning, as a result of this, some companies decide to fire us . In addition to him, some people cannot go to work or schools in taxi due to their financial situation. I kindly request that you address this matter promptly by allowing me to studied this letter.

If you require any additional information, please contact me at dabdumutalibov102@gmail.com. Thank you for your consideration of this request

Yours faithfully,

Diyorbek Abdumutalibov

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