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Band 5+: check my letter for ielts general and give score. Write a letter to friend who has agreed to look after your house and pet while while you are on holidays. your letter must cover contact detail when you are away, give instructions how to take care of your pet? describe other household that your friend should undertook.

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I would like to share a story about my friend from a holiday I took about two months ago. His name is Buğra, and he is my best friend.

When I went on vacation, I told him about my pet. I asked him to take care of it by feeding it on time and keeping my house clean. I also reminded him not to forget to water the flowers.

When I returned, there were no problems with my pet, and my house was very clean and tidy. However, my flowers had dried up. When I asked him if he had watered them, he apologized, saying, ‘I’m so sorry about your plants; I forgot to water the flowers.’ He looked very upset.

I reassured him that it was okay, saying, ‘No problem, you did a great job keeping my house clean and taking care of my pet. Thank you very much for that

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 4

house: 3

clean: 3

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Task Response

The letter does not fulfill the task requirements. It tells a story about a past holiday, rather than writing a letter to a friend who is looking after the house and pet.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-structured and easy to follow. The paragraphs flow logically.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate for the task, but there is room for improvement in using more diverse and sophisticated language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains some grammatical errors, but the overall grammar is generally accurate.

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