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Band 7+: During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Mr. Walker,

I am Jane Black, and we had a conversation on a Peach Airlines flight from Osaka to Hong Kong on the 1st of July. I believe we exchanged our business card during our flight, and discussed potential job opportunities at your restaurants. I am writing to express my interest in a position within your restaurant chain.

During our conversation, you mentioned your plans to expand your restaurant chain and the potential for managerial positions opening up within your organization. With a decade of experience in managing businesses, with a specialization in the hospitality industry I am confident that my background aligns well with your requirements. Moreover, as you emphasized the importance of teamwork, my experience collaboration with colleagues in team-oriented environments has been crucial in developing these competencies.

I appreciate your consideration of my application and eagerly anticipate the opportunity to discuss how my background and capabilities can contribute to the success of your restaurants.

Thank you for your time and attention.

Sincerely,

Jane Black

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

8.5

The letter fully addresses the task by reminding the businessman of when and where they met, stating the job interest, and explaining why the writer is suitable for the job.

Coherence & Cohesion

7

The letter is coherent and cohesive, with ideas logically organized. Paragraphing is well-managed. To enhance coherence, consider using more linking words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

7

There is a good range of vocabulary used accurately. Try incorporating more sophisticated vocabulary to further demonstrate lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7

A wide range of grammatical structures is used accurately. Work on minor punctuation errors for improved accuracy.

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