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Band 6+: During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job Begin as follows: Dear ... ,

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Dear sir,

I hope you are doing well. It was really nice to talk to you during my fright from Delhi to Goa, last Sunday. As you have shared valuable information and experience about your chain of restaurants. I would like to apply for a position of team lead in one of your cafe.

I am interested in this role as I have relevant experiece, I worked in a local cafe for 3 years. In addition, I am looking to explore some related or higher positions to build my career in food chain industry. As I can take advantage from my previous experience and can sharp my skills.

Moreover, I can ensure that I am going to be a best fit for this role as I could start to work with a little training, I have all the skills that a team lead should have like organization, socialization, team building and attention to details.

Thank you for considering me for this opportunity. I hope to hear back from you soon.

Best regards,

Happy

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, including reminding the businessman of their meeting, stating the desired job, and explaining suitability. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To improve, consider adding specific examples to strengthen the claims about your skills and experience. For instance, instead of just mentioning 'organization,' describe a situation where your organizational skills led to a positive outcome.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent and organized, but there are some areas where the flow could be improved. Consider using more varied linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly. For example, in the second paragraph, the transition between your experience and your career aspirations could be clearer. Additionally, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and sophistication. Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive words related to the restaurant industry and the skills required for the job. For instance, instead of 'valuable information,' you could use 'insightful advice.' Also, avoid overly informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, correct article usage ('a' vs. 'an' vs. 'the'), and subject-verb agreement. For example, 'fright' should be 'flight,' and 'experience' is often uncountable, so 'relevant experience' is better. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors.

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