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Band 7+: he chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism related industries in one UK city between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows the number of jobs in tourism-related industries in one UK city between 1989 and 2009; 1989: restaurants 1100, hotels 800, sport and leisure 500, travel and tours 700; 1994: restaurants 1200, hotels 1400, sport and leisure 800, travel and tours 900; 1999: restaurants 1400, hotels 1000, sport and leisure 900, travel and tours 1100; 2004: restaurants 900, hotels 1000, sport and leisure 1600, travel and tours 1100; 2009: restaurants 1100, hotels 900, sport and leisure 1000, travel and tours 700.

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The bar chart compares the number of jobs in four varying tourism-connected industries in one of the cities in the United Kingdom from 1989 to 2009.

At first glance, it is evident that throughout the entire period, restaurants and hotels were the most dominant industries. Conversely, the other industries, such as sport and leisure, and travel and tours were significantly less popular.

Looking at the details, across the entire period, the restaurant figure rose up remarkably. However, despite reaching its highest point in 2004 at approximately 1600 jobs, the industry dipped to around 1250 jobs in 2009. On the contrary, the figure for hotels reached its peak at 1400 jobs in 1999, followed by a moderate decrease during the next 10 years. Eventually, it accounted for 1010 jobs in 2009.

Turning to the remaining data, travel and tours had a similar trend to the figure for hotels. This industry reached its highest point in 1994 at 1010 jobs, and then hit its trough at 400 jobs in 2009. On the other hand, sports and leisure figure was the most oscillated one with its lowest points in 1994 and 2009 at 610 jobs, and its peak in 1999 at 1010 jobs.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

figure: 4

industries: 3

hotels: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing the industries. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., restaurants peak in 2004 at 1600 jobs, but the visual description shows 1600 for sport and leisure in 2004; hotels peak in 1999 at 1400 jobs, but the visual description shows 1400 in 1994; travel and tours peak in 1994 at 1010 jobs, but the visual description shows 900; sport and leisure lowest points and peak are also misstated). These inaccuracies detract from the task achievement. Additionally, the overview could be more precise, and some descriptions are confusing (e.g., 'restaurant figure rose up remarkably' but then drops). To improve, ensure data is accurately reported and focus on clear, correct key features.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-structured and easy to follow, with a clear overall introduction and logical grouping of information. The use of cohesive devices such as 'At first glance', 'Looking at the details', 'On the contrary', and 'Turning to the remaining data' helps guide the reader. However, there is a minor lapse in coherence when the description of the restaurant industry mentions a peak in 2004 at 1600 jobs, which seems to contradict the earlier statement that restaurants were the most dominant industry, as the data for other years is lower. Paragraphing is generally effective, but could be slightly more balanced.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and varied, with terms like 'dominant industries', 'significantly less popular', 'moderate decrease', and 'most oscillated one'. The phrasing is generally natural, though some expressions could be more precise (e.g., 'rose up remarkably' could be 'rose remarkably', and 'most oscillated one' is slightly awkward). Overall, the lexical range is good but not fully sophisticated, and there is room for more precise and varied word choices. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is largely accurate, with a good range of sentence structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of tenses. There are virtually no errors, as noted. However, a few minor issues exist, such as 'the restaurant figure rose up remarkably' (redundant 'up') and 'sports and leisure figure was the most oscillated one' (could be 'the most fluctuating'). Punctuation is correct throughout. The report demonstrates strong grammatical control, but not quite at the level of full flexibility and sophistication expected for a band 9.

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