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Band 5+: Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris, When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain.

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Halo Garuda Indonesia Airlines.

I’m Tsamarah Putri Zahra from the flight Number MH 0370 from New York to Paris on 20 february 2024. I think i just lost my cabin bag on the plane. I just recognize it when i arrived home. I’ve checked every places and i can’t found it.

My bag is black, shaped like a backpack, with a Kimetsu no Yaiba anime keychain, and it’s a limited edition Nike brand. I might also attach a picture of the Nike bag. Not too heavy, the size is for 21 liter.

Can you help me to find my bag, please? Because i need something in the bag to work. Please reply my massage as soon as possible. Because I will go to another country the day after tomorrow. Perhaps tomorrow I will come directly to the airport to inquire in person.

Word Count: 142

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter partially addresses the task by explaining the situation of leaving the cabin bag on the plane and requesting assistance in finding it. However, it lacks clarity in providing necessary details such as contact information and a more formal tone. It would be better to include specific details about the bag and its contents as well as a clear request for assistance. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The message is somewhat coherent, but there are issues with cohesion and paragraphing. The letter lacks a clear structure and the ideas are not presented in a logical sequence. It would be beneficial to organize the information more effectively and use appropriate paragraphing to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is somewhat appropriate, but there are instances of informal language and spelling errors. It would be beneficial to use more formal and precise language, as well as to review and correct spelling and grammar errors for a higher score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There is a range of structures used, but there are noticeable grammatical errors and issues with punctuation. It would be beneficial to review and correct these errors to improve grammatical accuracy and achieve a higher score.

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Band 5+: Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris, When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain.

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