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Band 4+: Many trees in your area being cut without an explanation. Write a letter to the mayor of your town.

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Dear sir,

I am writing to draw your attention to the trees of our town, which is being without permission to cut down.

I want to inform that the situation is happening in our small town .Initially, I am going to Introduce myself that I was born and reside here almost 25 years. The problem is. a chinese businessman has bought the main road of the town and tempted to cut down all roadside streets. Consequently, it affects of the environment and air quality . Additionally. My house is located near the road. Therefore the sunlight comes into my home directly. It quite distractes me at the morning. The citizens of the Shofirkon are extremely dissatisfied in this condition.

I would be grateful if you and local authorities do some remedies in these circumstances.

Yours faithfully,

S.Nigina

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing concern about the tree cutting and requesting action from the mayor. However, it could be more concise and focused. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter lacks a clear and logical flow. The ideas are not well-connected, and the writing is disjointed. The use of punctuation and sentence structure contributes to the lack of coherence.

Lexical Resource

The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but some choices are not entirely appropriate or accurate. The vocabulary could be more precise and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and readability. The sentence structure is often incorrect, and there are issues with verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.

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