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Band 5+: Many trees in your area being cut without an explanation. Write a letter to the mayor of your town.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I have a complaint letter about trees being cut without any explanation in my town. So I am going to write a letter to the judge of the town.

I want to inform you that this situation is happening in our town. Firstly i want to introduce myself to you. My name is Xurshida and surname is Fayzullayeva. I have been living in this area until 2009 years. This place is dear to me, so I don’t want to harm in this area. But many trees in my area being cut without an explanation is making me sad and some angry.

In addition, these trees are helping to make our town be attractive and beautiful place. In general, trees are useful to our health because they take in harmful air to themselves. If you will not ignore my complaint letter I will be very happy.

I look forward to your prompt response.

yours faithfully, Xurshida Fayzullayeve.

Word Count: 160

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

trees: 4

letter: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by complaining about the trees being cut down. However, the content includes some irrelevant information, such as the writer's introduction and the general benefits of trees. To improve, focus on providing specific details about the tree cutting, its impact, and what actions you want the mayor to take.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization could be improved for better flow. The introduction includes an unnecessary statement about writing to the judge. Each paragraph should focus on a single main point to enhance clarity. Transition words could be used more effectively to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more precisely. For example, instead of 'making me sad and some angry,' you could use more descriptive words like 'distressing and frustrating.' Also, avoid informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to verb tense consistency (e.g., 'being cut' should be revised), correct article usage, and sentence structure. For example, 'I have been living in this area until 2009 years' is grammatically incorrect. Review basic grammar rules and practice constructing more complex sentences accurately.

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