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The image shows a line graph detailing the number of visitors per month in summer 2013 (in thousands) to three museums. In June, the British Museum had 600, the Science Museum had 400, and the Natural History Museum had 500. In July, the British Museum had 700, the Science Museum had 300, and the Natural History Museum had 500. In August, the British Museum had 500, the Science Museum had 300, and the Natural History Museum had 400. In September, the British Museum had 400, the Science Museum had 400, and the Natural History Museum had 500.

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The line graph shows the number of visitors per month between 3 museums in London 2013.

Overall, British museum had the most of visitors compare to other two museums in London with highest peak in July. Meanwhile Science and Natural History museums experienced a decline in July to August month.

In June, The British museum had 600 thousands visitors, while Science and Natural museums were used by 400 and 500 thousand visitors respectively. In July British museum had reached 750 thousand people who were visited museum. Oppositely, Science and Natural history museums fall down about 400 thousand visitors.

In August, the British museum fall sharply to 500 thousands visitors, while other museums visitors were between 400 and 500 thousand. September month all museums experienced significant growth, The British museum recover the amount of visitors to 650.000 and other museums were around 450.000

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museums: 8

visitors: 7

museum: 6

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