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Band 5+: Percentage of people who can drive to various services in 15 minutes or less

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The image presents a bar chart illustrating the percentage of people in Rural and Urban areas who can drive to five services in 15 minutes or less. For Urban populations, the percentages are: Supermarket 100%, Secondary school 95%, Police 100%, Post office 100%, and Doctor 100%. For Rural populations, the corresponding figures are: Supermarket 70%, Secondary school 70%, Police 90%, Post office 100%, and Doctor 90%.

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The bar chart illustrates percentage of individuals who can drive to different services in 15 minutes or less, between rural and urban residents.

Overall, urban residents drive more and reach a peak, exceeding rural residents. While rural residents who drive to the post office are leading the chart, all other services in this region account for a lower percentage.

Rural residents, who drive to the supermarket and secondary school record a higher figure of 70%. Urban residents, who drive to the secondary school has a significantly higher figure of 95%, whereas driving to the supermarket reach at 100% Although rural drivers, who drive to the police station increase to 90%, urban drivers peak at 100%.

Rural and urban drivers, who drive to the post office account for the highest figure of 100%. While rural drivers, who drive to the doctor service account for 90%, which is less than urban drivers.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

drive: 8

urban: 6

rural: 5

residents: 5

drivers: 5

account: 3

figure: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and provides a comparison between the two groups. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data interpretation and logical presentation. For instance, stating that urban residents 'drive more' is an assumption not supported by the chart, which only measures accessibility, not frequency of driving. Additionally, the overview contains a slight contradiction regarding the post office. To improve, ensure that comparisons are made more smoothly and that the distinction between 'accessibility' (the ability to reach a service) and 'driving habits' is maintained. Focus on using more precise comparative structures to link the data points more effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the cohesion is weakened by repetitive sentence structures and the frequent use of relative clauses ('who drive to...') which makes the flow feel mechanical. To improve, try using a wider variety of cohesive devices and linking words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Similarly', 'Regarding') to connect ideas more smoothly rather than relying on repetitive noun phrases.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is functional but limited and repetitive. The phrase 'who drive to' is used excessively throughout the report. To achieve a higher score, you should employ more varied synonyms for 'people' (e.g., inhabitants, citizens, commuters) and 'services' (e.g., amenities, facilities). Additionally, work on using more precise verbs to describe data trends instead of just 'account for' or 'is'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical issues that affect the clarity of the report. There are subject-verb agreement errors (e.g., 'Urban residents... has' should be 'have') and issues with sentence fragments and run-on sentences. The use of relative clauses is often awkward and grammatically incorrect in context. Focus on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that your subjects and verbs always agree in number.

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