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The image presents a bar chart detailing the average percentage number of reported integration challenges per person across different age groups. For ages 18-34, reported challenges are 29% learning the local language, 46% finding somewhere to live, and 40% making friends. For ages 35-54, challenges are 35% learning the local language, 36% finding somewhere to live, and 39% making friends. For ages over 55, challenges are 54% learning the local language, 22% finding somewhere to live, and 23% making friends.

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The bar chart illustrates a common problems when people relocated in other countries.

Overall, it is certain, while integration processes people face to faces more common problems.For example, the chart mentioned local language, struggling to find places to live and making friends challenges between a different age groups.

Between 18 – 34 age groups of people more struggling to find new friends in new area, while 35-54 group of people to finding a friend problems persentage displayed 36%. In comprasion, olderyare not interesting to research new friends in new area, and the problem percentage was lower than other two types of groups. However, oldery people more strugglig not knowing a local language (54%). A 35-54 age group of majorities also face to face like this type of problems 35%, and young people’s group shows 29%.

During the integration process, a most majority of people have home challenges. These types of problems more face to face an young people 40%,like a secand group of people problem persentage also shows 39%. In contrast, old people not more struglling to find new location or appartment to live in othwe countries like a young groups.

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people: 9

problems: 4

group: 4

friends: 3

groups: 3

young: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by mentioning the different age groups and the specific challenges listed. However, the response is significantly hindered by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that occasionally obscure the meaning. While data points are included, the organization is somewhat repetitive, and the overview is not clearly defined. To improve, focus on using standard comparative structures (e.g., 'higher than', 'the most significant challenge') and ensure that the relationship between the data points is expressed clearly and logically.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat logical, but the progression is frequently interrupted by awkward phrasing and grammatical errors. While you attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'In comparison', 'However'), they are often used incorrectly or do not clearly link the ideas. To improve, focus on using transition words to create a smooth flow between sentences and ensure that each paragraph has a clear, singular purpose (e.g., one paragraph for language, one for housing, etc.).

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'comprasion', 'olderyare', 'secand', 'othwe') and incorrect word choices (e.g., 'face to face' instead of 'face', 'not interesting to research' instead of 'less concerned with'). There is a repetitive use of certain words. To improve, work on learning synonyms for common terms (e.g., instead of 'old people', use 'the elderly' or 'older age groups') and ensure that the words you choose fit the academic context of a report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and often impede the reader's understanding. There are significant issues with subject-verb agreement, sentence structure, and the use of articles. For example, phrases like 'a most majority of people' and 'more struggling not knowing' are grammatically incorrect. I recommend studying sentence construction, specifically how to form complex sentences using subordinating conjunctions, and practicing the correct use of comparative structures (e.g., 'more than', 'the highest percentage').

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