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Band 7+: plan A below shows a health centre in 2005, plan B shows the same place in the present day.

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The image displays two floor plans of a health center, one in 2005 and another in the present day. In 2005, the layout consists of a garden, a physiotherapy room, three consulting rooms (CR1, CR2, CR3), an office, and a reception area with an entrance, adjacent to parking for 12 cars. In the present day, the layout includes a garden, a physiotherapy room, a minor operations room, four consulting rooms (CR1, CR2, CR3, CR4), an office, and a reception area with entrance, all adjacent to parking for 30 cars.

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The two plans illustrate how a health center has changed from 2005 to the present day. Overall, the health center has undergone significant changes, with existing rooms being altered and new facilities added.

In 2005, the health center consisted of three consulting rooms, one on the western side of the building, next to an office, the other two on the eastern side next to a physiotherapy room. The reception desk located in the middle of the building to the north of the enterance. There was a 12-spaces car parking in the south of the site, while a garden located in the north.

At present, the layout is more complex. The number of the consulting rooms increased by one and most of the existing rooms being relocated to the south and the southeast of the building. Two new facilities, a minor operations room, in the northwest side, and a children’s play area, in the southeast of the building, were added. The enterance was relocated from the southern side of the building to the western side of the building. The number of car parking spaces was increased to 30 spaces, whereas he location of the office remained unchanged.

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the main changes in the health center between 2005 and the present. It provides a clear overview and organizes the information logically. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the report mentions a children's play area, which is not in the visual description, and it omits the garden's relocation. Additionally, there are minor spelling errors ('enterance' should be 'entrance') and a typo ('he' instead of 'the'). To improve, ensure all details are accurate and proofread for minor errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized and easy to follow, with clear paragraphs for the two time periods. However, some cohesive devices could be used more effectively to link ideas and avoid repetition. For example, using a wider range of linking words and referencing would enhance the flow. The overall structure is sound, but there is room for improvement in the smoothness of transitions.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and generally accurate, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'has undergone significant changes', 'relocated'). However, there is some repetition of words like 'building' and 'located', and a few awkward phrases such as '12-spaces car parking' and 'enterance' (spelling). A wider range of precise vocabulary and more sophisticated expressions would improve the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are several errors that affect clarity. For instance, 'The reception desk located' should be 'was located', 'the number of the consulting rooms increased' should be 'increased', and 'most of the existing rooms being relocated' should be 'were relocated'. There are also spelling errors ('enterance' for 'entrance', 'he' for 'the'). These errors, while not impeding overall understanding, indicate a need for greater accuracy and control.

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