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Band 4+: Rampart street today and the plan for changes to the street in 2035. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents two maps marked "Now" and "2035", each displaying labeled building icons and pathways. The "Now" map includes, from left to right: Food Store, Embassy, Old Castle, Museum of Architecture, Apartment House, Art Gallery, Theatre, Construction Site, and multiple Apartment House icons. The "2035" map shows: Pub, Food Store, Restaurant, Museum of Architecture, Hotel, Apartment House, Open Air Exhibition, Gift Shop, Exhibition Centre, Art Gallery, House, Theatre, and a Florist's. The pathways curve in similar manners in both maps, and trees are placed around the buildings.

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The maps provide information about the Rampart street today and the predict for changes to the street in 2035.

Overall, the street would become more tourist oriented, since a lot of entertainment will be built to 2035. They also planing to replace the large cars road with bycycle and pedestrians track.

In the western side, will be recreation area for locals or hotels residents, there would be a lot of facilities such as gift shop, restaurant and exhibition where people can relax and have some free time with advantages.

In the eastern side of map, we can see a lot of differences, like rebuilding old castle with new one, furthermore there would be a lake near by castle. Half part of the buildings suffered zero changes, however the construction site eventually would be done, and become to the florist zone. The giant cars run that occupied much area will be replaced with track for humas, moreover there would be parking zone for bycycle.

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Task Response

The report addresses the main purpose of the task and identifies some key changes, such as the shift toward tourism and the change in transportation. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. Some descriptions do not align with the provided visual information (for example, the mention of a lake or a 'new castle' which are not present in the description). Additionally, the report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that occasionally obscure the meaning. To improve, focus on accurately describing only the features provided in the visual, ensuring that comparisons are logical, and working on sentence structure to improve clarity and flow.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the progression of ideas is often interrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While there is an attempt to organize information by direction (western vs. eastern), the transitions between sentences are sometimes abrupt. To improve, use a wider variety of cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Regarding the western sector,' 'Moving to the eastern side') and ensure that each paragraph has a clear, central topic sentence that guides the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and often used incorrectly, which can obscure meaning (e.g., 'the predict for changes', 'with advantages', 'florist zone'). There is a reliance on simple words and some repetitive phrasing. To improve, aim to use more precise academic vocabulary related to urban planning and change, such as 'redevelopment,' 'transformation,' 'pedestrianized,' 'conversion,' or 'infrastructure.' Avoid informal or imprecise terms like 'a lot of' or 'giant cars run'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the clarity of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency (mixing present, future, and conditional incorrectly), and sentence structure (e.g., 'In the western side, will be recreation area'). Many sentences are fragmented or contain errors in word formation. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures, the correct use of future tenses for predictions (e.g., 'is expected to be' or 'will be'), and the use of articles (a, an, the).

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