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The image displays a table titled 'Participation in selected sports and physical recreation activities' showing participation percentages for males and females. For Walking for exercise: Males 16.5%, Females 30.4%. For Fitness/Gym: Males 15.1%, Females 19.1%. For Cycling/BMXing: Males 9.8%, Females 5.4%. For Jogging/Running: Males 8.7%, Females 6.4%. For Golf: Males 8.2%, Females 0%. For Swimming/Diving: Males 7.5%, Females 8.0%. For Tennis: Males 4.9%, Females 3.4%. For Netball: Males 0%, Females 4.5%. For Football (outdoor): Males 4.1%, Females 0%. For Basketball: Males 2.8%, Females 0%. For Yoga: Males 0%, Females 3.3%. The total participation percentage was 77.6% for Males and 79.4% for Females.

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The table demonstates the member of individuals over 15 in choosen sports and physical recreation activities regarding gender in Australia from 2011 to 2012. Overall, it shows that walking for exercise obtain the highest picked by males and females, while yoga and netball be the least for males. Besides, golf, football, and basketball had the smallest percentages of females.

To begin with, walking for exercise and fitness or gym were accounted by 16.5% and 15.1%, respectively by males gender. Whereas female members reached to 30.4% and 19.1%. These considered as highest participations in each gender.

Moreover, member of males in cycling, jogging, golf, and swimming got the range of 7.5% to 9.8%, where swimming took the least. Additionally, males member had no preffered to netball and yoga. Furthermore, golf, football, and basketball had no female participant.

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Task Response

The report adequately summarizes the main features of the table and makes some relevant comparisons. However, there are some omissions and a few inaccuracies. To improve, ensure all key data points are covered and double-check the accuracy of the reported figures. Also, consider a more structured approach to comparing and contrasting the data to enhance clarity. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to summarize the data and make some comparisons. However, the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping similar data points together and using clearer transitions between paragraphs. The introduction could be more concise, and the overview could provide a clearer summary of the main trends. The report could benefit from a more structured approach to presenting the data, such as dedicating a paragraph to each key trend or comparison.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary relevant to the topic, but there are instances where word choice could be more precise. For example, 'obtain the highest picked' could be rephrased for clarity. Expanding the range of vocabulary related to describing data and trends would enhance the report. Some awkward phrasing impacts clarity.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors are noticeable and affect clarity. Errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage are present. Correcting these errors and ensuring accurate punctuation would improve the overall quality of the report. There are several grammatical errors that need to be addressed to improve the accuracy and clarity of the writing.

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