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Band 5+: Task 1: The bar chart below shows the number of tourists who traveled to Australia in 1995 and 2005. The line graph shows the number of tourists who did this type of holiday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows: 1) Tourists to Australia: In 1995, UK had about 900,000, US about 700,000, Japan about 11,200,000; in 2005, UK had about 14,000,000, US about 5,000,000, Japan about 12,000,000. 2) Types of Holiday: Staying at resorts - 1995: 10,000,000, 1997: ~18,500,000, 1999: ~25,000,000, 2001: ~28,000,000, 2003: ~29,000,000, 2005: ~15,000,000; Backpacking - 1995: ~4,000,000, 1997: ~5,000,000, 1999: ~6,500,000, 2001: ~7,500,000, 2003: ~9,500,000, 2005: ~10,000,000.

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The bar chart gives information about the number of visitors to Australia from the three different countries, while the Australian tourists prefer stay at resorts or go backpacking in two years 1995 and 2005.

Overall, it is noticeable that same number of tourists attracted from UK and US in 2005, and Japan from 1995. Also, number of visitors of backpacking experienced stable growth all over the period.

In 1995, Japan accounted for 1.400.000 and showed dominance in the chart, however in 2005 Japan illustrated decrease significantly to 1 million. By contrast, number of tourists from the UK visited Australia which was accounted for about 800.000, while US illustrated lowest figure with 400.000 in 1995. In 2005 UK witnessed a gradual raise the same was that of US.

Australian tourists who prefer staying at resorts was approximately 1.500.000 tourists and in 2000s reached the peak to 2.500.000 tourists, yet was experienced dramatically decline by 1 million. In addition, tourists chosen backpacking showed 300.000 at the beginning, by the other years backpacking rose steadily to 1.200.000 tourists in 2005.

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backpacking: 4

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but there are several inaccuracies and omissions. The data for the bar chart is not accurately reported (e.g., Japan's figures are incorrect, and the UK and US numbers are misrepresented). The line graph data is also inaccurately described (e.g., resort numbers are understated, and backpacking figures are incorrect). The report would benefit from a clearer structure, separating the bar chart and line graph descriptions, and ensuring that all key trends and comparisons are accurately presented. Additionally, avoid vague statements like 'same number of tourists attracted from UK and US in 2005' without supporting data. Focus on precise data and clear trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear structure with an introduction and an overview, but the flow is disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. For example, 'the same was that of US' is confusing. Paragraphing is not effectively managed, as the second paragraph mixes data from different years without clear transitions. To improve, use clear topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect (e.g., one for the bar chart, one for the line graph). Use cohesive devices such as 'in contrast', 'similarly', and 'over the period' to link ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited, with some inaccuracies and repetition. For instance, 'illustrated decrease significantly' is awkward, and 'raise' should be 'rise'. There is some attempt at variety (e.g., 'dominance', 'gradual raise'), but the range is narrow. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'experienced a significant decline', 'saw a steady increase', and 'accounted for the highest number'. Avoid informal or incorrect terms like 'go backpacking' (should be 'backpacking' as a noun) and ensure word forms are correct.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that hinder clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement ('number of tourists ... was accounted'), incorrect verb forms ('prefer stay' should be 'prefer to stay'), and missing articles ('the same was that of US'). There is also inconsistent use of commas and periods. To improve, focus on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles. Practice writing complex sentences with accurate grammar, and proofread to eliminate basic errors.

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Band 5+: Task 1: The bar chart below shows the number of tourists who traveled to Australia in 1995 and 2005. The line graph shows the number of tourists who did this type of holiday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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