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Band 5+: Task 1: The bar chart below shows the number of tourists who traveled to Australia in 1995 and 2005. The line graph shows the number of tourists who did this type of holiday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows: 1) Tourists to Australia: In 1995, UK had about 900,000, US about 700,000, Japan about 11,200,000; in 2005, UK had about 14,000,000, US about 5,000,000, Japan about 12,000,000. 2) Types of Holiday: Staying at resorts - 1995: 10,000,000, 1997: ~18,500,000, 1999: ~25,000,000, 2001: ~28,000,000, 2003: ~29,000,000, 2005: ~15,000,000; Backpacking - 1995: ~4,000,000, 1997: ~5,000,000, 1999: ~6,500,000, 2001: ~7,500,000, 2003: ~9,500,000, 2005: ~10,000,000.

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The bar graph compares how many tourists who visited from the US, The UK and Japan to Australia from 1995 to 2005, however, the line graph depicts the number of visitor who traveled two types of holiday their destination between 1995 and 2005.

Overall, the number of UK and US visitors who traveled increase over the years, while Japan showed an opposite tend. In terms of holiday preferences, backpacking vacationers went up gradually , while staying at resorts rose initially befor falling steadily by 2005.

According to the bar graph, the number of vacationers from the UK rose significantly from 800000 to around 1500000 between the years 1995 and 2005. Similarly, the US visitors was increased dramatically from around 500000 to around 1500000 in the same years. However, the figure for Japan was declined by approximately 500000 over the period.

In terms of line chart, between 2020 and 2000, Staying at resorts grew considerably from 1500000 to 2500000 befor falling steadily to 1000000 by 2005. By contrast, backpacking figure is predicted to went up 500000 to 100000 over the given period.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

graph: 3

japan: 3

number: 3

between: 3

years: 3

around: 3

1500000: 3

500000: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address all parts of the task, but there are significant issues with data accuracy and coherence that impact the overall achievement. While the overview correctly identifies the general trends for both charts, the specific data points provided in the body paragraphs often contradict the visual description (for example, the numbers for the UK, US, and Japan, as well as the years mentioned in the line graph section, are inaccurate). Additionally, there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that occasionally obscure meaning. To improve, ensure that the data extracted from the charts is precise and that the chronological sequence of years is consistent throughout the report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, there are significant issues with cohesion. The use of 'however' in the first paragraph creates a comma splice error, and the transition between ideas is sometimes abrupt. Some sentences are difficult to follow due to awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Regarding', 'With respect to') and ensure that each sentence flows naturally into the next without grammatical interruptions.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and repetitive. While you attempt to use descriptive words like 'significantly' and 'dramatically', there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'befor', 'tend') and incorrect word forms (e.g., 'the US visitors was increased'). There is also a lack of precision in describing trends. To improve, work on expanding your range of synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease' and ensure that you use the correct noun/verb forms (e.g., 'a downward trend' instead of 'opposite tend').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede communication. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'US visitors was increased'), tense consistency (e.g., 'is predicted to went up'), and sentence structure (comma splices). Additionally, there are errors in preposition usage and article usage. To improve, practice complex sentence structures such as relative clauses and ensure that your verb tenses are consistent with the time periods described in the task. Pay close attention to the difference between active and passive voice (e.g., 'the number increased' vs 'the number was increased').

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