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Band 5+: Task 1: The graph below shows the total births and the deaths in a European country from 1950 to 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and give comparisons where relevant

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The image presents a line graph for 'Birth rate' and 'Death rate' with a vertical axis scaled from 0 to 1,200,000. For the years 1950, 1970, 1990, 2010, 2030, and 2050 respectively, the birth rates were: approximately 750,000, 1,000,000, approximately 580,000, 700,000, 700,000, and 700,000. The death rates for the same years were: approximately 680,000, approximately 720,000, 700,000, approximately 690,000, approximately 680,000, and approximately 820,000.

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A given chart depicts the information of the number of births and deaths in European in the span of 100 years since 1950.

Overall the birth rate fluctuates considerably until 2010, then staying stable to the last of the period.By contrast, the number of deaths show the same until 2030 it climb up.

A comprehensive analysis of the chart reveals that the in 1950 the number of birth was about 750,000 then it reached a peak of 1000,000 and fall down to 600,000 in 1970 and 1990 respectively. Moreover it recovered to 700,000 in 2010.After that year it will be predicted to stay unchanged during the remaining period.

With respect for the other figure,death rate was about 700,000 in 1950.From that years,it witnessed unchanged trend until 2030 it increase to 800,000 in 2050.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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number: 3

until: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the graph, including the trends for both births and deaths, and provides a clear overview. The comparison between the two data sets is present. To improve, ensure more precise use of grammatical structures, particularly when discussing future predictions (e.g., using 'is predicted to' instead of 'it will be predicted to'). Additionally, pay attention to subject-verb agreement and minor typographical errors to enhance the overall flow and professionalism of the report. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression is sometimes interrupted by awkward phrasing and punctuation errors (e.g., missing spaces after periods). To improve, ensure that cohesive devices (like 'By contrast' or 'Moreover') are used to create smooth transitions between ideas rather than just starting new sentences. Work on the logical flow within sentences to ensure the reader can follow the trends without effort.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive. There are several errors in word choice and formation, such as 'in European' instead of 'in a European country' and 'the last of the period' instead of 'the end of the period'. To reach a higher band, try to use a wider range of synonyms for trends (e.g., instead of 'fall down', use 'declined' or 'dropped') and ensure that nouns and adjectives are used with precision. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede communication. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the number of deaths show' should be 'shows'), tense consistency (mixing past and future without clear markers), and sentence structure (e.g., 'until 2030 it climb up'). Pay close attention to verb tenses, especially when describing historical data versus future projections. Using a variety of complex sentence structures correctly will significantly improve this score.

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