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Band 6+: The bar chart below gives information on the number of workers on different occupatios who migrated to Australia between 2009 and 2012

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The image displays a bar chart showing the number of skilled migrants to Australia from 2009-2012 in thousands: Accountants: 2009 (18), 2010 (20), 2011 (22), 2012 (26); Cooks: 2009 (9), 2010 (10), 2011 (12), 2012 (15); Software Engineers: 2009 (11), 2010 (12), 2011 (12), 2012 (14); Computer Programmers: 2009 (2), 2010 (3), 2011 (3), 2012 (5).

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The bar chart illustrates the number of workers in four occupations-accountant, cook, software engineer and computer programmer, who migrated to Australia from 2009 to 2012.

Overall, the figure for accountants and computer programmers showed an upward trend, albeit to varying degrees, with accountant being the most popular occupation, while cook and software engineer figures declined. Notably, the computer programmer migrants consistently had the lowest trend among the four occupations.

Focusing on accountant and computer programmer migrants first, the number of accountant migrants grew slightly from 20000 in 2009, to a peak of about 27000 in 2010. By 2012, this figure decreased to just above 20000, whereas programmer migrants remained relatively low at 2000 until 2011, before rising significantly to 5000 in 2021.

By contrast, starting at 28000 in the initial year, the number of software engineer migrants fell to about 22000, in prior to falling to 17000 in the eventual year, while the number of cook migrants grew slightly by 1000 from 17000, after which it dropped marginally to 16000 in 2012.

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migrants: 6

number: 4

computer: 4

programmer: 4

software: 3

engineer: 3

accountant: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are some inaccuracies and inconsistencies in the data presented. The description of trends is somewhat unclear and contains some errors. For example, the figures for accountants increased, not decreased. Also, the numbers cited in the third and fourth paragraphs do not always align with the data provided in the bar chart. To improve, ensure that the data cited is accurate and consistent with the visual information. Also, focus on providing a clearer and more concise description of the overall trends and specific data points.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a generally clear overview, but the organization could be improved for better flow. The overall trends are identified, but the paragraphing and linking of ideas could be more seamless. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to connect sentences and paragraphs more effectively. For example, transition words could be used to signal shifts in focus or to compare and contrast different occupations.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of vocabulary, appropriate for the task. However, there are instances where the word choice could be more precise. For example, instead of 'showed an upward trend, albeit to varying degrees,' you could use more specific language to describe the rate of increase. Continue to expand your vocabulary and focus on using words that convey precise meanings.

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The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of prepositions. For example, 'accountant migrants grew slightly from 20000 in 2009, to a peak of about 27000 in 2010' contains inaccuracies. Proofreading carefully and focusing on correcting common errors will improve your score.

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