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Band 6+: The bar chart below shows employment figures in different tourism-related industries between 2009 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart comparing total employment in thousands across five categories for the years 2009 and 2019. For 2009, 'Sports' shows 299.2, 'Travel' lists 60.9, 'Hotel (and other accomodation)' is at 284.7, 'Culture (museums, galleries, etc.)' has 283.4 and 'Food' is 82.8. For 2019, 'Sports' indicates 306.0, 'Travel' is 114.2, 'Hotel (and other accomodation)' displays 345.7, 'Culture (museums, galleries, etc.)' presents 357.7 and 'Food' is 77.4.

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The vertical column chart illustrates information about employment in vivid tourism-related areas such as sports, travel, hotels, culture, and food over ten years, from 2009 to 2019.

Overall, hotels and other accommodations have had the highest employment compared to other industries in both years. Meanwhile, sports provided the least amount of employment over the period.

In 2009, travel, sports, and culture provided 284.7, around 367.5, and roughly 437.4 thousand employees, respectively. In addition, travel, sports, and culture never exceed 500 thousand employees. Hotel and other accommodations touch 1,000 employment figures, while food is stuck at around 700,000 employment.

In 2019, all industries experienced an upward trend in terms of employment. Travel, sports, and culture have increased by 50 thousand employees, while other industries such as hotels and other accommodations and food have increased by 200,000 employees.

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employment: 5

sports: 5

other: 5

travel: 4

culture: 4

employees: 4

hotels: 3

accommodations: 3

industries: 3

thousand: 3

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6.5

The report provides a good overview of the main features of the chart, but it misses some key details and comparisons. For example, it doesn't mention the specific employment figures for each industry in 2019, and it doesn't compare the growth rates of different industries. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, there are a few instances where the flow of information could be improved.

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The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances where more precise language could be used. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

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The report contains a few grammatical errors, which detract from the overall clarity and accuracy.

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