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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows number of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows seal, whale, dolphin populations in Gomez Straits over several years: in 2006, seals 47, whales 23, dolphins 30; in 2010, seals 30, whales 20, dolphins 28; in 2014, seals 36, whales 18, dolphins 31; in 2018, seals 48, whales 27, dolphins 38.

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The bar chart presents data on numbers of marine animals (seals, whales and dolphins) in the Gormez Straits within the years 2006 to 2018.

Observing the chart, there is a gradual increase in Dolphins over the years from less than 20 to exceeding 50 whereas the number of Whales have been fluctuating between the range of 20-30. As for the Seals, there was a decrease in 2010 in comparision to the other years. Furthermore, the most apparent marine animal from the three would be the Dolphin, more specifically in 2018.

According to the graph, in 2006 there are more Seals than Dolphins regardless the increase of Dolphins throught the years, and it is observant that as the number of Seals decrease throughout the years, the number of Dolphins increase, though this trend is not followed in 2018 as the number of Seals have increase by a few than in 2006.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

years: 5

increase: 4

dolphins: 4

number: 4

seals: 4

there: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and makes some comparisons, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the dolphin numbers do not exceed 50. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately represented and consider including more specific data to support your observations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. The introduction is adequate, but the body paragraphs lack a clear structure. Transitions between sentences and ideas could be improved to enhance coherence. For example, the shift from discussing whales to seals in the first body paragraph feels abrupt. The second paragraph also lacks a clear focus and jumps between different observations without a strong connecting thread. Consider using more cohesive devices and structuring paragraphs around specific trends or comparisons to improve the flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are instances where more precise or sophisticated word choices could enhance the description. For example, using 'increase' and 'decrease' repeatedly can be replaced with synonyms like 'rise,' 'grow,' 'decline,' or 'fall.' While the vocabulary is generally appropriate, expanding the range and using more varied language would improve the overall quality of the report. Also, avoid informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement ('there is a gradual increase in Dolphins' should be 'there is a gradual increase in the number of dolphins'), preposition use ('in comparision to' should be 'in comparison to'), and sentence structure (the second sentence in the second paragraph is awkward and unclear). Correcting these errors and ensuring accurate grammar throughout the report would significantly improve its readability and overall quality. Pay close attention to verb tenses, article usage, and sentence construction to enhance grammatical accuracy.

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