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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the montly rainfall in five cities in 2020.

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The image shows a bar chart titled 'Rainfall (mm) in Five Cities: March to September' for the year 2020, covering Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou, Chengdu, and Urumqi. In March, rainfall was: Beijing 10, Shanghai 110, Guangzhou 90, Chengdu 25, and Urumqi 10. In June, rainfall was: Beijing 75, Shanghai 180, Guangzhou 280, Chengdu 150, and Urumqi 25. In September, rainfall was: Beijing 50, Shanghai 100, Guangzhou 175, Chengdu 125, and Urumqi 10.

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the bar chart illustrates the monthly rainfall from march to september in five citise in China

overall, all five citise show a increase trend in rainfall from March to June, all the nubmers decrease after June,Among the five cities,Guangzhou has the most rainfall,Urumqi is the driest city.

In Beijing the rainfall around 10mm in March adn in June rise to about 80mm after fall to 50mm in September, the rainfall number of Urumqiis drop than other citise,Urumqi’s rainfall just about 10mm in March to around 25mm in June,and fall to about 15mm in September.the total rainfall in Guangzhou is more than other citise,is surpasses all the other citise in both June and September,the rainfall about 100mm in March and uplift to above 300mm in June,and drop to about 175mm in September,the rainfall from Shanghai in March just over 100mm,and rice to about 175mm in June,in September fall back to abovt 100

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