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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the number of miles travelled in a year by men and women for six different purposes in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart, 'Mileage trips made by men and women', comparing miles travelled per year for six purposes: Work (Women: 28,000, Men: 36,000), Shopping (Women: 28,500, Men: 26,000), Taking children to school (Women: 27,000, Men: 24,000), Meeting friends (Women: 23,000, Men: 21,500), Entertainment (Women: 13,000, Men: 16,000), and Day trip (Women: 7,000, Men: 11,000).

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The bar chart shows the number of miles travelled ina year by men and women for six different purposes in a particular country.

Overall it csn be clearly seen that men travelled more in per year for work, entertainment and day trip. However women crossed more to meeting friends, taking children to school and shopping.

Men travelled significantly to work it’s approximately 31000miles per year. It is the highest figure in this graph, women are about 28500milies. Men travelled more to entertainment too its 16000milies and women less to 4000then men(12000). The last line that men dominate is for day trip men travelled 11000 and women 600 miles.

However there are three purposes that women are lidered then men.

Women go 23500miles to meeting friends and men 22500 miles. For taking children to school women 27000 and men 24000 miles. Women spend 2000 miles more than men and men 26000 miles.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

women: 8

miles: 5

travelled: 5

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main features and making comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., work mileage for men and women, day trip for women) and some unclear phrasing (e.g., 'women less to 4000then men', 'women are lidered'). The structure is present but could be more coherent. Focus on accurate data representation and clearer comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. Ideas are presented in a somewhat disjointed manner, and paragraphing is not effectively managed. The overall structure could be improved by grouping related information and using cohesive devices more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive. There are several inaccuracies and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'lidered', 'csn', 'milies'). To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary related to data description, such as 'exceeded', 'surpassed', 'approximately', and 'significantly'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues, which hinder clarity. Sentence structures are often incorrect or incomplete. Focus on basic grammar rules, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of tenses. Proofreading is essential.

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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the number of miles travelled in a year by men and women for six different purposes in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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