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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar graph comparing five age groups: 15 to 24 (Men: 52.8, Women: 47.7), 25 to 34 (Men: 48.9, Women: 42.2), 35 to 44 (Men: 52.5, Women: 39.5), 45 to 54 (Men: 43.1, Women: 53.3), 55 to 64 (Men: 45.1, Women: 53.1), and 65 and over (Men: 46.7, Women: 47.1).

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The bar chart compares Australian males and females across the different age groups who participated in regular physical activity in 2010.

It is clear that women recorded higher rates of regular physical activity than males in most age groups.However, males had a slightly higher percentage in the 15-24 age category.

Regarding the first category, men obviously had slightly higher proportion than women, with approximately 52.8 per cent of regular physical activity, compared to 47.7 per cent for women.However, in other categories the situation was reversed, men recorded lower figures than women. Moreover the women physical activity across the all categories were rose gradually.

65 age group was noticeably simular, almost was just under the half.While women were dominated them, men were not able to reach the half per cent in all categories. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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women: 5

physical: 4

activity: 4

males: 3

regular: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and identifies some key trends, such as the general comparison between genders. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. The claim that women's physical activity rose gradually across all categories is inaccurate based on the provided data, and the final paragraph contains confusing phrasing and mathematical errors (e.g., 'half per cent' instead of '50 percent'). To improve, ensure that comparisons are logically structured and that data descriptions are precise and grammatically correct. Avoid making sweeping generalizations that are not supported by the visual evidence.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the progression of ideas is hindered by several issues. While there is an attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Regarding the first category', 'However', 'Moreover'), they are sometimes used incorrectly or are followed by punctuation errors. The final paragraph is particularly difficult to follow due to fragmented sentences and unclear logical connections. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that transitions between sentences flow logically without abrupt breaks.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and repetitive. There are several instances of imprecise word choices and awkward phrasing, such as 'the women physical activity across the all categories were rose gradually' and 'women were dominated them'. These errors obscure the intended meaning. To improve, focus on learning collocations related to data description (e.g., 'showed an upward trend' instead of 'were rose') and ensure that nouns and adjectives are used accurately to describe trends and comparisons.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the readability of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense usage (e.g., 'were rose'), and sentence structure (e.g., '65 age group was noticeably simular, almost was just under the half'). Additionally, there are errors in article usage and word forms. To improve, practice constructing complex sentences using subordinate clauses and pay close attention to basic grammar rules such as verb conjugation and the correct use of comparative structures.

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