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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of employees working remotely in six industries in 2025.

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The image contains a bar chart titled 'Employees Working Remotely by Industry (2025)', showing the percentage of employees working remotely in six different industries. The vertical axis represents percentages from 0 to 80. The percentages for the industries listed on the horizontal axis are: IT at approximately 78%, Finance at 65%, Education at approximately 42%, Marketing at approximately 58%, Healthcare at 20%, and Manufacturing at 15%.

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of individuals who worked online in six fields in 2025.

Overall, the dominant position took IT specialisation. Whereas, the least popular industry which had the lowest percentage was Manufacturing. One noticeable feature is that more employees’ preferences were given to professions connected with economics and computers.

Comparing figures, Healthcare was slightly higher than Manufacturing, at 20% and 15%. The values between 40 and 50 percentages accounted for Education, which significantly decreased among other industries over 60%.

It’s worth mentioning that IT, about 78%, Finance, at 65%, and Marketing, at 60% had an upward trend for employees working remotely.

In general, workers working from home more commonly choose fields which require less communication with humans.

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and provides a clear overview of the data. However, there are some issues with data interpretation and logical reasoning. Specifically, the final sentence makes a speculative claim about 'less communication with humans' that is not supported by the chart itself; in Task 1, you should only report the data provided without making outside assumptions. Additionally, some phrasing regarding trends (e.g., 'had an upward trend') is inappropriate for a bar chart representing a single point in time (2025), as trends imply change over a period. To improve, focus on describing the static comparisons accurately and avoid introducing external opinions or unverified correlations. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat disjointed. The use of 'Whereas' at the start of a sentence creates a fragment rather than a cohesive link. While there is an attempt to group data, the logical flow between sentences is interrupted by awkward transitions. To improve, ensure that cohesive devices (like 'In contrast' or 'Furthermore') are used to connect complete thoughts rather than starting sentences with subordinating conjunctions. Additionally, avoid making speculative conclusions in the final sentence that are not directly supported by the data provided.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and occasionally used inaccurately. For example, 'the dominant position took IT specialisation' and 'upward trend' are not appropriate in this context; a bar chart showing a single point in time (2025) cannot show a 'trend' (which requires change over time). Phrases like '40 and 50 percentages' are non-standard; 'the 40% to 50% range' would be more natural. Try to use more precise academic synonyms for 'show' and 'work online', such as 'depict', 'remote employment', or 'telecommuting'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical issues that hinder clarity. The sentence starting with 'Whereas' is a fragment, and the phrasing 'more employees' preferences were given to' is awkward. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and sentence structure, such as 'The values... accounted for Education'. To improve, focus on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that each sentence contains a clear subject and predicate. Pay close attention to how you describe data points to ensure the grammar supports the mathematical comparison.

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