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Band 7+: The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1985 and 1994.

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The image contains a bar chart showing 'Japanese tourists travelling abroad' (in millions) and a line graph showing 'Australia's share of Japan's tourist market' (percentage). The number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad was: ~4.9 million in 1985, ~5.5 in 1986, ~6.8 in 1987, ~8.4 in 1988, ~9.6 in 1989, ~11.0 in 1990, ~10.7 in 1991, ~11.8 in 1992, ~12.1 in 1993, ~13.5 in 1994, and ~15.4 in 1995. The percentage of these tourists going to Australia was: 2.0% in 1985, 3.0% in 1986, 4.0% in 1987, ~4.8% in 1988, ~4.2% in 1989, ~4.8% in 1990, ~5.2% in 1991, ~5.6% in 1992, ~6.2% in 1993, and 6.0% in 1994.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad from 1985 to 1995, while the line graph shows the percentage of these tourists who visited Australia between 1984 and 1994.

Overall, the number of Japanese people travelling overseas increased steadily throughout the period. Similarly, Australia’s share of Japan’s tourist market rose, despite some minor fluctuations.

In 1985, around 5 million Japanese travelled abroad. This figure rose gradually to about 7 million in 1987 and exceeded 10 million for the first time in 1990. After a slight dip in 1991, the number continued to climb, reaching its peak of roughly 15 million by 1995.

The similar upward trend seen in the proportion of Japanese tourists visiting Australia. In 1984 was accounted 2 %. The percentage grew steadily and reached around 5% in 1988. There was recorded a small drop in 1989, while the figure recovered quickly, rose to about 6% in 1993

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main trends and features of both graphs. The description of the bar chart is well-structured and includes key data points. The description of the line graph is generally accurate, although it could benefit from more specific data points and a clearer indication of the fluctuations. To improve, ensure that all significant data points are mentioned and that the relationship between the two visuals is clearly articulated.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The progression of information is logical, making it easy to follow the trends and figures presented in the charts. To improve coherence, ensure that each sentence within a paragraph directly relates to the main point of that paragraph. Also, use a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary suitable for describing trends and data. Terms like 'increased steadily,' 'minor fluctuations,' 'exceeded,' and 'proportion' are used appropriately. To further enhance the lexical resource, try incorporating more precise vocabulary related to numerical data and trends, such as 'plateaued,' 'surged,' or 'remained stable.' Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition of words like 'rose' and 'reaching.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, 'In 1984 was accounted 2 %' is grammatically incorrect and should be rephrased. Similarly, 'There was recorded a small drop' is awkward. Focus on using correct sentence structures and verb tenses. Proofreading carefully for subject-verb agreement, correct article usage, and appropriate tense usage will help improve grammatical accuracy.

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