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Band 5+: The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1985 and 1994.

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The image contains a bar chart showing 'Japanese tourists travelling abroad' (in millions) and a line graph showing 'Australia's share of Japan's tourist market' (percentage). The number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad was: ~4.9 million in 1985, ~5.5 in 1986, ~6.8 in 1987, ~8.4 in 1988, ~9.6 in 1989, ~11.0 in 1990, ~10.7 in 1991, ~11.8 in 1992, ~12.1 in 1993, ~13.5 in 1994, and ~15.4 in 1995. The percentage of these tourists going to Australia was: 2.0% in 1985, 3.0% in 1986, 4.0% in 1987, ~4.8% in 1988, ~4.2% in 1989, ~4.8% in 1990, ~5.2% in 1991, ~5.6% in 1992, ~6.2% in 1993, and 6.0% in 1994.

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The bar chart illustrats the number of international Japanese tourists from 1985 to 1995,and the line graph shows proportion of people going to Australia in 1984 and 1994.

Overall,in 1985, tourists who went to Australia was low,while in 1985,it was higher than all years.The share rose steadily 5 million,ending the period at a higher point compared to the beginning.

İn 1985 and 1986,the number of foreign tourists were about 9 and 10 million respectively.From 1987 to 1989 it was increased steadily to 10 million.Foreign tourists who went to Australia was about 12 million in 1990.However,this number decreased slightly to 10 million in 1991.And it was dramatically rose to 16% in 1995.

In 1985, Australia’s share stood at around 2%.This figure increasd gradually to 5% in 1988.However,it was decreased marginally to 4% in 1989.It was rose slightly to 6% between 1990 and 1993.After reaching a peak of almost 7% in 1993,the share fell slightly to 6% in 1994.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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tourists: 4

number: 3

australia: 3

share: 3

million: 3

slightly: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported and some issues with clarity. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from both charts and ensure clear, logical organization of information. Also, pay attention to grammar and word choice for better clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be improved to enhance coherence. For example, the connection between the overall trends and the specific data points needs to be clearer. Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively used to group related information.

Lexical Resource

The report uses an adequate range of vocabulary, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and sophistication. Some word choices are not entirely accurate or natural. For instance, using more precise terms to describe trends (e.g., 'increased sharply' instead of 'increased steadily') would enhance the report. Consider expanding your vocabulary related to describing data and trends. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Sentence structure is often simple, and there are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. For example, 'tourists who went to Australia was low' contains errors in subject-verb agreement. Focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and ensuring grammatical accuracy to improve the overall quality of your writing.

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Band 5+: The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1985 and 1994.

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The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1985 and 1994.

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